Peer Response to Imagery Poems

1) what's this poem about?

2) mark 2 strongest lines of imagery (s) and 2 weakest lines of imagery (w)

3) suggest words to be cut out; are there any the writer can eliminate?

Writer:

1)  ask peer responder if you have areas you aren't sure about

2)  write 2nd draft taking peer response into account (you make final decisions); make sure you have a title, at least 8 lines, lots of images, condensed and intense language.

3) due Friday, Oct 4th